Start with a positive comment, then gently suggest for improvement. Show that you care and want to help, not criticize.
Hi, Caitlyn
Its been a while since I uploaded my homework.
Honestly, Ive been feeling exhausted and drained last week, and I thought this week would be better, but it still feels the same.
I have a meeting with my manager during lunch today to talk about it, so I probably wont be able to join class. I just wanted to let you know in advance.
If you see this message, please consider todays class canceled. Ill definitely join tomorrow!
Thanks always.
Hi, Elena!Yes! It's been a while since you did your homework, and thank you for taking the time to do it. I know you are very busy, and I totally understand. Hang in there! I know you can do it! Also, even though you informed me to consider the class canceled, I will still call you on your mobile today as per the company's protocol. I really hope to talk to you soon!
- T. Caitlyn
Start with a positive comment, then gently suggest for improvement.
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Show that you care and want to help, not criticize.
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Its been a while since I uploaded my homework.
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Honestly, Ive been feeling exhausted and drained last week, and I thought this week would be better, but it still feels the same.
>> Honestly, I felt exhausted and drained last week, and I thought this week would be better, but it still feels the same.
I have a meeting with my manager during lunch today to talk about it, so I probably wont be able to join class.
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I just wanted to let you know in advance.
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If you see this message, please consider todays class canceled.
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Ill definitely join tomorrow!
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Thanks always.
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