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김순님/2025-03-24

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I don't want my husband to be a leader He has never been a leader since he was born. If he wants to be a leader. He should have lived there for over 10 years at least. That's because he can convince them if something happens. I think he is kind to others. But his intention to be a leader is wrong. Good leader is to be chosen from others .It is not from his choice.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Great day, Ms. Sunny!
I understand your point and that is true, however, there are instances when our thoughts are beyond our expectations. For instance, A man is rich, and because of that, he becomes the leader of a small village, because people think that this man can help them in financial matters. 
Aki~


I don't want my husband to be a leader
>>> CORRECT!

He has never been a leader since he was born.
>>> CORRECT!

If he wants to be a leader. He should have lived there for over 10 years at least.
>>> If he wants to be a leader, he should have lived there for over 10 years at least.

That's because he can convince them if something happens.
>>> CORRECT!

I think he is kind to others.
>>> CORRECT!

But his intention to be a leader is wrong.
>>> CORRECT!

Good leader is to be chosen from others .It is not from his choice.
>>>  A good leader is to be chosen by others. It is not by his choice.

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