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21mar2025 homework

김나라/2025-03-24

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: What makes you like a song? The melody, the lyrics, or something else? answer: I think the first thing Melody needs to do is listen to it constantly. After that, I think the song gets better when I look for the lyrics and listen to the song while looking at the lyrics.

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Hello, Ms. Nara! I agree with you. The melody is what catches most people's attention but we could like it even more once we read the lyrics.

-T. Sonny

I think the first thing Melody needs to do is listen to it constantly.

>>I think, the melody is the first thing that makes me like the song and listen to it constantly.

After that, I think the song gets better when I look for the lyrics and listen to the song while looking at the lyrics.

>>After that, I think the song gets better when I read the lyrics and listen to it at the same time.