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Talk about your favorite book.
박순호/2025-03-24
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I'm embarrassed to talk about the book because it's been a long time since I last read one.
These days, like other people, I prefer to watch the internet or YouTube rather than read books.
Nevertheless, let me tell you my favorite book, it's a book I read a long time ago.
I am very interested in history, especially world history.
That book is about world history and changed my perspective on world history.
Korea, like the Philippines, is a country that has been greatly influenced by the United States.
So when I was in school, even in college, I learned world history centered on the United States.
I was taught that the United States was good and other countries were bad and that Jews are always the victims and Arabs are the terrorists.
But after reading that book, I got to know that real history was very different from what I had learned.
I used to recommend the book to my juniors and give it to them as gifts.
The name of the book is 'World History Read in Reverse'.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
That seems to be a really interesting book.
I wonder what specific information they unraveled in that book.
_T. SHAY^^
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I'm embarrassed to talk about the book because it's been a long time since I last read one.
Thank you for sharing.
That seems to be a really interesting book.
I wonder what specific information they unraveled in that book.
_T. SHAY^^
***
I'm embarrassed to talk about the book because it's been a long time since I last read one.
>>I'm embarrassed to talk about books because it's been a long time since I last read one.
These days, like other people, I prefer to watch the internet or YouTube rather than read books.
These days, like other people, I prefer to watch the internet or YouTube rather than read books.
>>These days, like other people, I prefer to surf the internet or watch YouTube videos rather than read books.
Nevertheless, let me tell you my favorite book, it's a book I read a long time ago.
Nevertheless, let me tell you my favorite book, it's a book I read a long time ago.
>>Nevertheless, let me tell you about my favorite book. It's a book I read a long time ago.
I am very interested in history, especially world history.
I am very interested in history, especially world history.
>>Correct
OR: I'm into history, specifically world history.
That book is about world history and changed my perspective on world history.
OR: I'm into history, specifically world history.
That book is about world history and changed my perspective on world history.
>>That book is about world history, and it changed my perspective on world history.
Korea, like the Philippines, is a country that has been greatly influenced by the United States.
Korea, like the Philippines, is a country that has been greatly influenced by the United States.
>>Correct
OR: Like the Philippines, Korea has been greatly influenced by the United States.
So when I was in school, even in college, I learned world history centered on the United States.
OR: Like the Philippines, Korea has been greatly influenced by the United States.
So when I was in school, even in college, I learned world history centered on the United States.
>>Correct
OR: So, when I was a student, from primary school to the university, I learned world history centered on the United States.
I was taught that the United States was good and other countries were bad and that Jews are always the victims and Arabs are the terrorists.
OR: So, when I was a student, from primary school to the university, I learned world history centered on the United States.
I was taught that the United States was good and other countries were bad and that Jews are always the victims and Arabs are the terrorists.
>>Correct
OR: I was taught that the United States was a good country and the others were not. Also, the Jews were victims, and the Arabs were terrorists.
But after reading that book, I got to know that real history was very different from what I had learned.
But after reading that book, I got to know that real history was very different from what I had learned.
>>Correct
OR: But reading that book made me realize the difference between what I learned and the truth about history.
I used to recommend the book to my juniors and give it to them as gifts.
OR: But reading that book made me realize the difference between what I learned and the truth about history.
I used to recommend the book to my juniors and give it to them as gifts.
>>I used to recommend the book to my juniors and give it to them as a gift.
The name of the book is 'World History Read in Reverse'.
The name of the book is 'World History Read in Reverse'.
>>Correct
OR: The book is called 'World History Read in Reverse'.
OR: The book is called 'World History Read in Reverse'.
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