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김우인/2025-03-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

What makes me burst into laughter is clip videos of variety shows in YouTube. There were several variety shows that were in charge of every Korean's weekends in my childhood including me. Especially the show named 'Infinite Challenge' almost conquered(?) Korea and is still loved these days although it's not on the air anymore. The reason why I burst into laughter through clip videos of this show is because every 'challenge' that they face in the program is fresh and fascinating. Plus, harmony of panels in the show is so smooth and sticky that I can't help laughing watching it. I watched almost every episode when I was in my childhood but it's still fun. Align to the name 'Infinite Challenge', the show was broadcasted for about 13 years every weekends. So there are piles of episodes to make as a clip and I'm looking forward to rest of the clips being uploaded.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! It sounds like "Infinite Challenge" really holds a special place in your heart! It's amazing how some shows, even after they're off the air, continue to bring laughter and fond memories, especially when the content is so timeless and entertaining. Thank you for sharing!

-T. Sonny

What makes me burst into laughter is clip videos of variety shows in YouTube.

>>What makes me burst into laughter are clip videos of variety shows on YouTube.

There were several variety shows that were in charge of every Korean's weekends in my childhood including me.

>>There were several variety shows that were a staple of every Korean's weekends during my childhood, including mine.

Especially the show named 'Infinite Challenge' almost conquered(?) Korea and is still loved these days although it's not on the air anymore.

>>One of them, especially the show 'Infinite Challenge', almost took over Korea and is still loved today, even though it's no longer on air.

The reason why I burst into laughter through clip videos of this show is because every 'challenge' that they face in the program is fresh and fascinating.

>>The reason I burst into laughter watching clip videos of this show is that every 'challenge' they face on the program is fresh and fascinating.

Plus, harmony of panels in the show is so smooth and sticky that I can't help laughing watching it.

>>Additionally, the harmony among the panelists is so smooth and natural that I can’t help but laugh while watching it.

I watched almost every episode when I was in my childhood but it's still fun.

>>I watched almost every episode during my childhood, and it’s still fun to watch.

Align to the name 'Infinite Challenge', the show was broadcasted for about 13 years every weekends.

>>In line with the name 'Infinite Challenge', the show aired for about 13 years every weekend.

So there are piles of episodes to make as a clip and I'm looking forward to rest of the clips being uploaded.

>>There are piles of episodes that can be turned into clips, and I'm looking forward to the rest of them being uploaded.