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Is technology advancing more rapidly than it did in the past? Do you feel concerned about keeping up

이진태/2025-03-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Specific technologies is advancing high rapidly, such as smart phone, AI. AI could replace human someday and someone would be lost thier job. However, a new job will create in the future. Our ancestor also had experienced same situation during Industrial Revolution. but we still live.
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Specific technologies is advancing high rapidly, such as smart phone, AI.
>> Specific technologies are advancing rapidly, such as smartphones and AI. 

AI could replace human someday and someone would be lost thier job.
>> AI could replace humans someday, and some people may lose their jobs.

However, a new job will create in the future.
>> However, new jobs will be created in the future. 

Our ancestor also had experienced same situation during Industrial Revolution. but we still live.
>> Our ancestors also experienced a similar situation during the Industrial Revolution, but we still thrive.
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