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Something I want to eat if I have to eat only one food

한진원/2025-03-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I have to eat one food, I will eat shabu shabu because it has a lot of vegetables and meat. And boiling food is more healthy than frying or baking food
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Racheal! Shabu-shabu sounds good. You can still have a variety of ingredients anytime you want. It's also perfect in cold weather. Let's talk again soon. See you!
--Teacher Anji


If I have to eat one food, I will eat shabu shabu because it has a lot of vegetables and meat.
>> If I have yo eat only one food, I will eat shabu-shabu becuase it has a lot fo vegetables and meat.
And boiling food is more healthy than frying or baking food.
>> And boiling food is healthier that frying or baking.
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