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How do you plan on preparing for the match?

노승철/2025-03-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Looking back at my game last season, there were a lot of mistakes in driver swings. These days, I'm practicing my driver shot a lot so that I don't make mistakes in my driver swing. I've seen a lot of cases which if I made a mistake in the first shot, my mind have collapsed after that. I had to have a good driver shot to play a fun game. Above all, it is most important for me to have confidence in my swing.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi David. You did a great job expressing your thoughts about improving your driver swing! I made a few grammar and clarity adjustments to make your sentences smoother. Keep up the practice and stay confident in your game. 

~ T. Lia

Looking back at my game last season, there were a lot of mistakes in driver swings.
>> Looking back at my game last season, I made a lot of mistakes in my driver swings.

These days, I'm practicing my driver shot a lot so that I don't make mistakes in my driver swing.
>> These days, I’m practicing my driver shot a lot to avoid making mistakes in my swing.

I've seen a lot of cases which if I made a mistake in the first shot, my mind have collapsed after that.
>> I’ve noticed that when I make a mistake on my first shot, my mindset often collapses afterward.

I had to have a good driver shot to play a fun game.
>> I need to have a good driver shot to enjoy the game.

Above all, it is most important for me to have confidence in my swing.
>> Above all, having confidence in my swing is the most important thing for me.
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