ȣ/2025-03-19
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Eddy!
This was such a great example
of taking responsibility and making a smart decision under pressure! You were
put in a tough situation where you had to handle an important request on your
own, and you did it so well. Instead of waiting and risking losing the order,
you used your knowledge and past examples to make a reasonable decision. That
shows strong problem-solving skills and confidence.
The fact that your boss later
agreed with your decision proves that you made the right call. It also shows
that they trust you to handle things when theyre not around. Thats a big
deal! Taking initiative like this not only helps the company but also builds
your own credibility and leadership skills.
Your writing is clear and to
the point, and I love how you explained the situation logically. If you want to
make it even stronger, you could add a little more about how you felt at that
moment. Were you nervous, confident, or unsure at first? That would help bring
more depth to your story.
Overall, you did a fantastic
job! Keep up this level of detail and confidence in your writing. Im looking
forward to reading more from you!
~Teacher Cathy
When
my company`s boss was out of office, a buyer requested urgent discount.
>>When
my company's boss was out of the office, a buyer requested an urgent discount.
Because
of the time difference, my boss was not able to reply at that time.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Due
to the time difference, my boss was unable to respond at that moment.
So, i
handled it referencing another examples.
>>So,
I handled it by referencing other examples.
For
example, my boss gave 3% discount for the order over specific amount.
>>For
example, my boss gave a 3% discount for orders over a specific amount.
I
replied to the buyer that we can give you 3% discount if you order more than
specific amount.
>>I
replied to the buyer that we could offer a 3% discount if they ordered more
than a specific amount.
Finally,
we got the order and my boss agreed to give 3% discount to them.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Finally,
we secured the order, and my boss agreed to give them a 3% discount.