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이현아/2025-04-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I can imagine a day without gadgets. But I can’t live without them. I use my phone to talk to people, check the news, and even study. Without gadgets, everything feels less convenient and slower. They’re a big part of my daily life now.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Isabel. Your response is simple, clear, and relatable. You’ve done a great job expressing your thoughts in a natural and concise way. Just remember that short sentences can often be joined for better flow. Keep writing, you're showing excellent progress with your sentence structure and clarity.

~ T. Lia

I can imagine a day without gadgets. But I can’t live without them.
>> I can imagine a day without gadgets, but I can’t live without them.

I use my phone to talk to people, check the news, and even study.
>> CORRECT

Without gadgets, everything feels less convenient and slower.
>> CORRECT

They’re a big part of my daily life now.
>> CORRECT

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