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김나은/2025-03-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I study,my phone tidy in near me. because it disturbing my study. I focus when I don't have my phone then I set my phone far from me.
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Hi, Na Eun! I appreciate you checking on the homework topic and keeping up with the homework. I'm glad you keep improving yourself every day. I can see a very bright future for you. Have a good night and have a good rest. ~Teacher Jane c",) 


When I study,my phone tidy in near me. because it disturbing my study. 
>> I get distracted when I keep my phone close to me while studying.  

I focus when I don't have my phone then I set my phone far from me. 
>> I can focus better when I keep my phone far from me. 

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