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Write some strange but interesting information that you know about the moon

차유진/2025-03-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The moon is very cold at night and the moon is very hot at night. And the reason why there is ice on the moon is because I think the moon is very cold at night so the moon have ice.
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Here's your corrected composition, Yale!  Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. 


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              Write some strange but interesting information that you know about the moon. 



The moon is very cold at night and the moon is very hot at night.
>> The moon is very cold and very hot at night. 

And the reason why there is ice on the moon is because I think the moon is very cold at night so the moon have ice.
>> And the reason there is ice on the moon is because I think the moon is very cold at night so the moon has ice. 

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