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How do you keep yourself fit?

이복희/2025-03-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I work out everyday for to keep my fit and health. Before I liked to swim, now I like to kind of dance. I am trying to eat less when I have meal, expeally dinner. Because if I have big dinner, I feel that my stomach is not comfortable and can't sleep well. I think that to eat less is good for everything. I enjoy eating vegetable stew. It can make simple. It is good for health, keep fit and very delicious. You can try it. You must be like it.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good day, Ms. Eva!
wow, I guess you are a fitness enthusiast! Your recommendations are great to follow, they are easy and it would not be a burden to anyone who would like to do it. See you in class!
Aki~

I work out everyday for to keep my fit and health.
>>>   I work out every day to keep fit and healthy.

Before I liked to swim, now I like to kind of dance.
>>>  I used to like swimming but now, I am inclined to dance.

I am trying to eat less when I have meal, expeally dinner. Because if I have big dinner, I feel that my stomach is not comfortable and can't sleep well.
>>> I am trying to eat less especially at dinner because it would affect my sleep if I have a big dinner.

I think that to eat less is good for everything.
>>> I think eating less is good for everything.

I enjoy eating vegetable stew. It can make simple.
>>> I enjoy eating vegetable stew because it is easy to prepare.

It is good for health, keep fit and very delicious. You can try it. You must be like it.
>>> It is good for your health, keeps you fit, and is very delicious. You can try it. You must like it.
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