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What are the pros of socializing with other people?

이지윤/2025-03-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
First of all, you can get along with other people easily. It's probably because you've already hung out with other people a lot. Sociality can also be nurtured. This is because interactions such as actions and conversations occur between many people. In addition, you will be able to learn the rules and learn how to grasp others easily. You will be able to learn not only the rules that each other must follow, but also how to be considerate and identify others in them. The other thing I get is that I can know how to talk and social issues. Conversations are essential to socialize, so you can learn how to communicate. And you'll be able to understand social issues or the person's interests through numerous conversation topics.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello! 

Thank you for sharing your answer about the pros of socializing with other people. 
Socializing is indeed very important in building relationships with others as we learn how to make conversations and understand each other. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


First of all, you can get along with other people easily. It's probably because you've already hung out with other people a lot.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: First of all, you can easily get along with others, probably because you’ve had many social experiences.

Sociality can also be nurtured. This is because interactions such as actions and conversations occur between many people.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Social skills can also be nurtured through interactions like actions and conversations with others.

In addition, you will be able to learn the rules and learn how to grasp others easily. You will be able to learn not only the rules that each other must follow but also how to be considerate and identify others in them.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: In addition, you will learn the rules and understand how to interact with others effectively. You will also gain knowledge of not only the rules everyone must follow but also how to be considerate and understand others.

The other thing I get is that I can know how to talk and social issues.
>> The other thing is that I can learn how to discuss and understand social issues.

Conversations are essential to socialize, so you can learn how to communicate. And you'll be able to understand social issues or the person's interests through numerous conversation topics.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Conversations are essential for socializing, helping you improve your communication skills and understand social issues or other people’s interests.
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