ȣ/2025-03-17
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Eddy!
This is such a relatable and fun essay. Thank you for
doing your homework again. It feels so nice to read your writing.
Your story perfectly captures the excitement and hope
that comes with buying a lottery ticket. I love how you described your feelings
before and after the results. It really makes your experience feel real. The
way you said that the lottery is about "buying hope and expectation"
is very thoughtful and true.
Even though winning might be like "when pigs
fly," the little excitement and hope it brings can be enjoyable. Keep
writing with this honesty and charm. You are doing great.
~Teacher Cathy
Yes i
have. I wanted to be a lotto winner when i bought a lotto.
>>Yes,
I have. I wanted to be a lotto winner when I bought a lotto ticket.
However,
as you know i could not be a lotto winner.
>>CORRECT
OR>>However,
as you know, the chances of being a lotto winner is very slim.
Before
lotto numbers were announced, i believed i can win.
>>Before
the lotto numbers were announced, I believed I could win.
But,
like many people, i did not get a even $1.
>>But,
like many people, I did not even get $1.
I felt
that a lotto is just buying hope and expectation.
>>I
felt that playing the lotto is just buying hope and expectation.
Nowadays,
i hardly buy it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Nowadays,
I rarely buy it.
But,
when i buy it, i can have expectation until numbers are announced.
>>But
when I buy it, I can have expectations until the numbers are announced.
I
think it is not bad to feel this emotion sometimes.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
think it's not bad to experience this feeling occasionally.