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권경희/2025-03-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Originally , the meaning of free size is flexible and quite a large size. But I have experienced that some clothes are very tight and small even though by buying free size clothes. I think also this is a shallow commercial trick of fashion business. It makes women obsessed with overweight.
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Ms. Lily!
I like the way you express your thought about "free size" and I totally agree that it is a commercial trick for women. Though there is an advantage, they should still be avoiding tricking people.
Aki~


Originally, the meaning of free size is flexible and quite a large size.
>>> CORRECT!
or >> Originally, "free size" was meant to indicate a flexible and relatively larger fit.

But I have experienced that some clothes are very tight and small even though by buying free size clothes.
>>> But I have experienced that some clothes are very tight and small, even though I bought free size clothes.
>>> However, I've personally found that some "free size" clothes can be very tight and small.


I think also this is a shallow commercial trick of fashion business.
>>> I think also this is a shallow commercial trick of the fashion business

It makes women obsessed with overweight.
>>>  It contributes to making women feel insecure about their weight.
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