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심윤아/2025-03-14

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I think It is better to study in a school because at home,we should study ourselves. the most important thing is We can't learn new things that we are curious about.

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Thank you for this Stella!

I think It is better to study in a school because at home,we should study ourselves.

>>> I think it is better to study in a school because at home we should study by ourselves.

The most important thing is We can't learn new things that we are curious about.

>>> correct (The most important thing is we can't learn new things that we are curious about.)