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이영숙/2025-03-14

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3/12 homework My favorite time is at 7:30pm because after is my time 3/11 homework My sisters said if she had problem with her husband. She makes delicious meal.aet it together and then tell her husband what wrong.
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Hello, Michelle!
Thank you for doing your homework! It's nice that at least after 7:30, you can already rest or do whatever you want. Also, I agree with your sister, having a good meal together is an effective way to calm down so you can settle issues or problems.
- T. Caitlyn 
My favorite time is at 7:30pm because after is my time
>> My favorite time is at 7:30 p.m. because after that, it's my free time.
My sisters said if she had problem with her husband. She makes delicious meal.aet it together and then tell her husband what wrong.
>> My sister said that if she has a problem with her husband, she makes a delicious meal, eats it together, and then tells her husband what's wrong.
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