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What kind of business would you like to start? I want to startr bar business. Even If start is very hard to me, I confidence success to business. Cause When I was little, I experience part time job in HOF BAR.
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I want to startr bar business.
>>I want to start a bar business.
Even If start is very hard to me, I confidence success to business.
>>Even if, it would be difficult to start a business, I am confident that this kind of business would succeed.
Cause When I was little, I experience part time job in HOF BAR.
>>Cause When I was little, I had a part-time job in a Hof Bar.
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