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권경희/2025-03-14

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People are comforted and mistaken owing to fake and clever VIP games. I am upset their stupid and ignorant delusion. If we have high self-esteem, we don't fooled like vulgar commercial trick.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good afternoon, Ms. Lily!
You have a very good point! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Aki~


People are comforted and mistaken owing to fake and clever VIP games.
>>>  People are often comforted and misled by fake and deceptive VIP schemes

I am upset their stupid and ignorant delusion.
>>> I am upset by their stupid and ignorant delusion.
>>> I’m upset by their naive and ignorant beliefs

If we have high self-esteem, we don't fooled like vulgar commercial trick.
>>>  If we have high self-esteem, we won’t be fooled by such shallow commercial tricks
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