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Talk about your favorite day of the week
박순호/2025-03-14
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Of course, my favorite day is Friday.
Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week's work and look forward to the next two day break.
If next Monday is a substitute holiday like the previous Monday, I am even happier to take a three-day break.
Especially in the spring like these days, I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding or golf during weekend, so on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
On the other hand, although it is good to enjoy outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel depressed when I think about the upcoming Monday.
I work as an advisor now, so I don't have that much work, but when I was a director, the workload was so much that I really hated going to work on Mondays. So back then, I was really depressed on Sundays.
Now I'm happiest on Fridays and most depressed on Sundays, but less depressed than Sundays of the past.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
I guess most people like Fridays.
In my case, I don't have a favorite day these days.
_T. SHAY^^
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Of course, my favorite day is Friday.
Thank you for sharing.
I guess most people like Fridays.
In my case, I don't have a favorite day these days.
_T. SHAY^^
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Of course, my favorite day is Friday.
>>Correct
OR: Like most people, my favorite day is Friday.
Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week's work and look forward to the next two day break.
>>Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week's work and look forward to the next two-day break.
OR: Fridays make me happy because it's the last day of the working week, and I can look forward to the two-day break.
If next Monday is a substitute holiday like the previous Monday, I am even happier to take a three-day break.
>>Correct
OR: In cases where the holiday or substitute holiday falls on a Monday, I am even happier to have a long weekend.
Especially in the spring like these days, I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding or golf during weekend, so on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
>>I especially like spring because I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding a bike or playing golf during the weekend. So on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
On the other hand, although it is good to enjoy outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel depressed when I think about the upcoming Monday.
>>Correct
OR: On the other hand, although I can enjoy the outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel sad thinking about Monday which is just around the corner.
I work as an advisor now, so I don't have that much work, but when I was a director, the workload was so much that I really hated going to work on Mondays.
>>Correct
OR: These days, I am working as an advisor, and I am not that busy. However, back when I was a director, the I worked a lot that I really hated to work on Mondays.
So back then, I was really depressed on Sundays.
>>Correct
OR: Like most people, my favorite day is Friday.
Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week's work and look forward to the next two day break.
>>Fridays make me happy because it means I can finish the week's work and look forward to the next two-day break.
OR: Fridays make me happy because it's the last day of the working week, and I can look forward to the two-day break.
If next Monday is a substitute holiday like the previous Monday, I am even happier to take a three-day break.
>>Correct
OR: In cases where the holiday or substitute holiday falls on a Monday, I am even happier to have a long weekend.
Especially in the spring like these days, I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding or golf during weekend, so on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
>>I especially like spring because I can enjoy my favorite outdoor sports like riding a bike or playing golf during the weekend. So on Fridays, I feel happy making plans for the weekend.
On the other hand, although it is good to enjoy outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel depressed when I think about the upcoming Monday.
>>Correct
OR: On the other hand, although I can enjoy the outdoor activities on weekends, I also feel sad thinking about Monday which is just around the corner.
I work as an advisor now, so I don't have that much work, but when I was a director, the workload was so much that I really hated going to work on Mondays.
>>Correct
OR: These days, I am working as an advisor, and I am not that busy. However, back when I was a director, the I worked a lot that I really hated to work on Mondays.
So back then, I was really depressed on Sundays.
>>Correct
OR: So, back then I usually felt sad on Sundays.
Now I'm happiest on Fridays and most depressed on Sundays, but less depressed than Sundays of the past.
>>Now I'm happiest on Fridays and most depressed on Sundays, but less depressed than the Sundays in the past.
Now I'm happiest on Fridays and most depressed on Sundays, but less depressed than Sundays of the past.
>>Now I'm happiest on Fridays and most depressed on Sundays, but less depressed than the Sundays in the past.
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