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김순님/2025-03-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Accurate pronunciation helps us to listen to English. We learned shape of mouth which is related to location of tongue when we were middle school. We would like to send our children to kindergarten which has American teacher. We think such as this education can help our children for English pronunciation skill. I think as fast as possible people have to learn english for their pronunciation.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Ms. Sunny!
Mouth formation is very important for pronunciation, as it directly affects how sounds are produced. We must follow this without putting exaggeration.
Have a great weekend!
Aki~


Accurate pronunciation helps us to listen to English.
>>> CORRECT!

We learned shape of mouth which is related to location of tongue when we were middle school.
>>> We learned the shape of the mouth, which is related to the location of the tongue, when we were in middle school.
>>> We learned about mouth formations for pronunciation in the middle school.

We would like to send our children to kindergarten which has American teacher.
>>> We would like to send our children to kindergarten, which has an  American teacher.

We think such as this education can help our children for English pronunciation skill.
>>> We think that such an education can help our children with English pronunciation skills.

I think as fast as possible people have to learn english for their pronunciation.
>>> I think as fast as possible people have to learn English for their pronunciation.
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