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김나은/2025-03-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I hold my mind every day. I try to understand other people. I walk of many thought day. so I reduce my thought.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, Na Eun. Thank you once again for checking the homework part. I hope I was able to understand what you were trying to say in your homework. If you have any questions or clarifications on your homework, we'll talk about it in class if you want. See you in class. Good night! ~Teacher Jane c",)


1. I hold my mind every day. 
>> I have a lot of things on my mind every day. 

2. I try to understand other people. 
>> CORRECT 

3. I walk of many thought day. so I reduce my thought.
>> I tend to overthink many things so I try to avoid thinking too much. 
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