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김나은/2025-03-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My best surprise is me because I keep me keeping surprise. I am more than expected surprise. I can do something and can be afraid. But I am froud myself.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Na Eun. I find your essay interesting. I am happy to read that you are a constant surprise even to yourself. I hope you keep surprising yourself by doing the unexpected things. You are going to achieve a lot more than you expected even in learning English. Keep it up and keep the homework coming. Have a good night and a good rest. See you tomorrow in class! ~Teacher Jane ^_^


My best surprise is me because I keep me keeping surprise. 
>> My best surprise is me because I keep surprising myself. 

I am more than expected surprise. 
>> I surprise myself when I can do things more than I expect. 

I can do something and can be afraid. 
>> I do things even though I'm afraid. 

But I am froud myself.
>> So I am proud of myself. 

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