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How does regular physical activity benefit mental health and overall well-being?

신봉규/2025-03-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Regular physical activity improves mental health and makes me less tired. Strong mental health makes for good results in anything.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


Regular physical activity improves mental health and makes me less tired. Strong mental health makes for good results in anything.
>> Regular physical activity improves mental health and helps me feel less tired. Strong mental health leads to better results in everything.
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