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If you could be anywhere right now where would you be?

차유진/2025-03-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I could be anywhere I right I want to stay in Europe because I'm very tired so I want to rest in Mt. Alps and I want to eat cheese.
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Here's another corrected composition, Yale!  Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good night's sleep!  


Cheers,
Jean~~



        

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If I could be anywhere I right I want to stay in Europe because I'm very tired so I want to rest in Mt. Alps and I want to eat cheese.
>> If I could be anywhere right now, I would want to be in Europe because I'm very tired so I want to rest in Mt. Alps and eat cheese.
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