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What are your thoughts on power interruptions?

차유진/2025-03-11

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My thoughts power interruptions is scary because the power interruptions is dark so it is scary power interruption in my school four years ago.
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Here's your corrected composition, Yale!  Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided.   


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My thoughts power interruptions is scary because the power interruptions is dark so it is scary power interruption in my school four years ago.
>> I think power interruptions are scary because it becomes dark without electricity. For example, there was a power interruption four years ago in my school and I was scared. 
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