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김지숙/2025-03-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Fish has gills and special nostrils.they are breathing in the ocean and they specially get oxygen.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Eric,

Thanks for doing your homework, although I wished you could have use one sentence for each word.  ^^

-Teacher Ash

Here are your corrections:

Fish has gills and special nostrils.
>> Fish has gills and special nostrils.

they are breathing in the ocean and they specially get oxygen.
>> The gills help to get oxygen out of water so they can breathe. 


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