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What are some famous snacks in Korea?
이승훈/2025-03-11
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
well, when korean winter, sometimes can showing some Pojang macha on the street.
Pojang macha is tent style's restaurant.
Pojang macha is smply convient restaurant. not heavy style food.
sure of can eat full old day, but simply eatting food now a days.
most Pojang macha is composed many food.
among food(snack) bung u ppang is best snack to me.
bung u ppang is fish shape bread. "bung u" korean means species of fishes.
this snack is composed with flour and sweet red beans.
this food is very hot and delicious.
so when i winter, i bought "bung u ppang" and eat.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Hun!
Whenever I watch Korean dramas, I usually see pojang macha. I have always wanted to try going to one of them because, in Korean dramas, they usually eat tteokbokki, sundae, and odeng, which look really appetizing. I'm also familiar with bung-u-ppang since I see it in several shows as well. Hopefully, I can experience going to a pojang macha and enjoy these foods someday!
- T. Caitlyn
well, when korean winter, sometimes can showing some Pojang macha on the street.
>> During the Korean winter, pojang macha can sometimes be seen on the street.
Pojang macha is tent style's restaurant.
Pojang macha is tent style's restaurant.
>> Pojang macha is a tent-style restaurant.
Pojang macha is smply convient restaurant. not heavy style food.
Pojang macha is smply convient restaurant. not heavy style food.
>> Pojang macha is a simple and convenient restaurant, not a place for heavy meals.
sure of can eat full old day, but simply eatting food now a days.
sure of can eat full old day, but simply eatting food now a days.
>> Sure, you can eat a full meal there, but nowadays, people usually just have a quick bite.
most Pojang macha is composed many food.
most Pojang macha is composed many food.
>> Most pojang macha offer a variety of foods.
among food(snack) bung u ppang is best snack to me.
among food(snack) bung u ppang is best snack to me.
>> Among these foods or snacks, bung-u-ppang is my favorite.
bung u ppang is fish shape bread.
bung u ppang is fish shape bread.
>> Bung-u-ppang is a fish-shaped bread.
"bung u" korean means species of fishes.
>> 'Bung-u' in Korean refers to a species of fish.
this snack is composed with flour and sweet red beans.
this snack is composed with flour and sweet red beans.
>> This snack is made with flour and sweet red beans.
This food is very hot and delicious.
This food is very hot and delicious.
>> CORRECT
so when i winter, i bought "bung u ppang" and eat.
so when i winter, i bought "bung u ppang" and eat.
>> So, in winter, I buy bung-u-ppang and eat it.
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