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이영숙/2025-03-11

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This restaurant was popular but it lost young Customers . It would have been better if modernized their dishes and design.
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Hello, Michelle!
You are right! These restaurants are popular, but not for the younger generation because most young people prefer new and unique dishes and Instagrammable places. Yes, it would have been nice if they could modernize them, but I also think that would cost a lot of money.
- T. Caitlyn
This restaurant was popular but it lost young Customers .
>> This restaurant was popular, but not to young customers.
It would have been better if modernized their dishes and design.
>> It would have been better if they had modernized their dishes and design.
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