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How do seasons affect your attitude ?
박순호/2025-03-11
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
To be honest, I couldn't understand exactly the meaning of the question "How do seasons affect your attitude ?".
So I asked the Chat Gpt what the question meant.
And the Chat Gpt answered like this : this question is asking how different seasons (spring, summer, autumn, winter) change your mood or feelings. is it right ?
So I will say based on the Chat Gpt's answer.
As I already talked to you, my favorite season is spring.
In Korea, spring means a beginning.
In spring, the cold winter ends and flowers bloom and all schools start a new semester. and outdoor activities that were suspended during the winter can resume.
That's why I get excited when spring comes.
On the other hand, I get depressed in the winter because I have to finish the year and I can't do any outdoor activities.
Even though summer is hot and humid, I'm happy because I can go on a summer vacation to the beach or the mountains.
In autumn, I get sentimental because the leaves are falling and winter is approaching.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Soon Ho^^
Yes, Chat GPT is right.
Thank you for sharing.
Some people are really affected by the seasons or weather.
In my case, sometimes I enjoy the rainy days.
It's a good time to watch a movie while eating snacks (if I'm not busy). Or I can just stare at the window watching the raindrops.
_T. SHAY^^
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To be honest, I couldn't understand exactly the meaning of the question "How do seasons affect your attitude ?".
Yes, Chat GPT is right.
Thank you for sharing.
Some people are really affected by the seasons or weather.
In my case, sometimes I enjoy the rainy days.
It's a good time to watch a movie while eating snacks (if I'm not busy). Or I can just stare at the window watching the raindrops.
_T. SHAY^^
***
To be honest, I couldn't understand exactly the meaning of the question "How do seasons affect your attitude ?".
>>Correct
OR: Honestly, I didn't understand what the question is asking.
So I asked the Chat Gpt what the question meant.
So I asked the Chat Gpt what the question meant.
>>So, I asked Chat GPT what the question meant.
And the Chat Gpt answered like this : this question is asking how different seasons (spring, summer, autumn, winter) change your mood or feelings. is it right ?
And the Chat Gpt answered like this : this question is asking how different seasons (spring, summer, autumn, winter) change your mood or feelings. is it right ?
>>And Chat Gpt answered this way: this question is asking how different seasons (spring, summer, autumn, winter) change your mood or feelings. Is it right ?
So I will say based on the Chat Gpt's answer.
So I will say based on the Chat Gpt's answer.
>>So, I will share my answer based on Chat GPT's answer.
As I already talked to you, my favorite season is spring.
As I already talked to you, my favorite season is spring.
>>As I already told you, my favorite season is spring.
In Korea, spring means a beginning.
In Korea, spring means a beginning.
>>In Korea, spring means start or beginning of something.
In spring, the cold winter ends and flowers bloom and all schools start a new semester. and outdoor activities that were suspended during the winter can resume.
In spring, the cold winter ends and flowers bloom and all schools start a new semester. and outdoor activities that were suspended during the winter can resume.
>>In spring, the cold winter ends, flowers bloom, and all schools start a new semester. Aside from those, outdoor activities that were suspended during the winter can resume.
That's why I get excited when spring comes.
That's why I get excited when spring comes.
>>Correct
OR: Those are the things that excites me about spring.
On the other hand, I get depressed in the winter because I have to finish the year and I can't do any outdoor activities.
Even though summer is hot and humid, I'm happy because I can go on a summer vacation to the beach or the mountains.
OR: Those are the things that excites me about spring.
On the other hand, I get depressed in the winter because I have to finish the year and I can't do any outdoor activities.
Even though summer is hot and humid, I'm happy because I can go on a summer vacation to the beach or the mountains.
>>On the other hand, I get depressed in winter because I have to finish the year, and I can't do any outdoor activities.
OR: On the other hand, I feel blue during winter because it means the year is about to end, and I can't do any outdoor activities.
Even though summer is hot and humid, I'm happy because I can go on a summer vacation to the beach or the mountains.
In autumn, I get sentimental because the leaves are falling and winter is approaching.
Even though summer is hot and humid, I'm happy because I can go on a summer vacation to the beach or the mountains.
In autumn, I get sentimental because the leaves are falling and winter is approaching.
>>Correct
OR: In autumn, I get sentimental because the leaves are falling and winter is just around the corner.
OR: In autumn, I get sentimental because the leaves are falling and winter is just around the corner.
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