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한진원/2025-03-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I need to throw away my old books because, despite not reading them, they become only as decoration. And old books take a lot of space in my house, but I can't throw them away because I am attached them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Racheal! Old stuff take up a lot of space but hard to let go due to sentimental reasons. I think it's a different kind of courage being able to do so. Thank you for this answer. See you!
--Teacher Anji

I need to throw away my old books because, despite not reading them, they become only as decoration.
>> I need to throw away my old books because, despite not reading them, they have become just decoration.
 And old books take a lot of space in my house, but I can't throw them away because I am attached them.
>> Old books take up a lot of space in my house, but I can't throw them away because I am attached to them.
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