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김나은/2025-03-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I will paint I thinking in the world. The world in my thought is warm,friendly and careful but sometimes cold,haertlessing and parece. I want to express in my paint.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey, Na Eun. Thank you for trying to keep up with the homework. I appreciate your hard work. Continue to check on your spelling and the spacing of words before and after punctuation marks. Other than that, you did a great job expressing your thoughts. I hope you're having a good rest tonight. See you tomorrow in class. ~Teacher Jane ", 


I will paint I thinking in the world. 
>> I will paint what I think of the world. 

The world in my thought is warm,friendly and careful but sometimes cold,haertlessing and parece. 
>> In my mind, the world is warm, friendly, and full of care but sometimes it's also cold, heartless, and cruel. 

I want to express in my paint. 
>> I want to express it in a painting. 



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