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Yes, I like sushi.

유수빈/2025-03-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I like sushi. Actually, I ate sushi on last Saturday. Especially, I like raw soy sauce shrimp sushi the most. This texture is chewy and soft, and also this taste is sweet and salty. But, sushi is quite expensive for me, so I can't eat often !!
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Hi Kara!

I am not a fan of sushi. 
I tried it once, but I think the fish quality wasn't that good. 
If given a chance, with better quality, I might try it again. 

Andrea 

Yes, I like sushi. Actually, I ate sushi on last Saturday.
>> Correct 

Especially, I like raw soy sauce shrimp sushi the most.
>> I especially like the raw soy sauce shrimp sushi the most.

This texture is chewy and soft, and also this taste is sweet and salty.
>> The texture is chewy and soft, and the taste is sweet and salty. 

But, sushi is quite expensive for me, so I can't eat often !!
>> But sushi is quite expensive for me, so I can't eat often!!

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