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이유민/2025-03-10

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1. The God had created universe 2. The gold is the most precious metal. 3. Kalidasa is the Shakespeare of India. 4. This is the best book I have ever read. 5. Cats killed rats. 6. A cat is on a roof. 7. Mahatma Gandhi was great leader of India. 8. The stone hit me on head. 9. John is the smallest boy in the class but Peter is the biggest. 10. I would like to buy a pair of stockings and a couple of shirts.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

HelloYumin,

I do believe that you are determined to enhance your abilities in English.

There were some mistakes but don't let those mistakes conquer your strength.

I hope that you will still continue to develop this way.

You can learn from this process.

See yourself as a person who will be successful. So don't pull yourself down I know you can do it! 
 ^.^ Just keep it up!!

T. Jeny


1. The God had created universe
>>God has created the universe.
2. The gold is the most precious metal.
>>Gold is a precious metal.
3. Kalidasa is the Shakespeare of India.
>>correct
4. This is the best book I have ever read.
>>correct
5. Cats killed rats.
>>The cat killed the rat.
6. A cat is on a roof.
>>The cat is on the roof.
7. Mahatma Gandhi was great leader of India.
>>Mahatma Gandhi was a great leader of India.
8. The stone hit me on head.
>>correct
9. John is the smallest boy in the class but Peter is the biggest.
>>correct
10. I would like to buy a pair of stockings and a couple of shirts.
>>correct
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