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/2025-03-10

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ȭ ýϴ. i saw a movie intern yesterday ΰ ٽ Ŀӽ Ȱ ޾ ȮǾϴ. The e-commerce business of jules, The Main charcter was energized and the business extended. ݸ鿡, λ 30 ٹߴ ϴ. On the other hand, Dex-one, where Ben served for 30 years as vice president, has disappered into hitory. 𿡼 ͳ ȭȣ ˻ մϴ. You can search your phone number on the internet from anywhere. ׷ ̻ ȭȣδ ʿ䰡 ϴ. So the phone book is no longer needed. ó ¶ θ ̿ Ÿ ֽϴ. Today, A similar phenomenon is occuring due to the development of online shopping malls.
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Great job on your essay, Joseph! You clearly understand the dispute and its key points, and you've explained them well. Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
ȭ ýϴ.
i saw a movie intern yesterday
>>>I watched the movie The Intern yesterday.
ΰ ٽ Ŀӽ Ȱ ޾ ȮǾϴ.

The e-commerce business of jules, The Main charcter was energized and the business extended.
>>> Jules, the main character, energized the e-commerce business, leading to its expansion.

ݸ鿡, λ 30 ٹߴ ϴ.

On the other hand, Dex-one, where Ben served for 30 years as vice president, has disappered into hitory.
>>>On the other hand, Dex-One, where Ben served as vice president for 30 years, has faded into history.

𿡼 ͳ ȭȣ ˻ մϴ.

You can search your phone number on the internet from anywhere.
>>>You can look up your phone number online from anywhere.

׷ ̻ ȭȣδ ʿ䰡 ϴ.

So the phone book is no longer needed.
>>> CORRECT~!^^

ó ¶ θ ̿ Ÿ ֽϴ.

Today, A similar phenomenon is occuring due to the development of online shopping malls.
>>> Today, a similar phenomenon is occurring due to the rise of online shopping malls.