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차진혁/2025-03-09

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I'm care of my toys is lego mincreft figures because I like a mincreft. And another lego figures or my history book.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. See you again on Wednesday!

Cheers,

Jean~~

How do you take care of your action figures?

I'm care of my toys is lego mincreft figures because I like a mincreft.

>> I take care of my toys, such as LEGO Minecraft figures because I like them.

And another lego figures or my history book.

>> And I like my other LEGO figures or historical action figures.