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김나은/2025-03-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I show that my worth to my actions. I will do correct actions of my worth.And I try to do that.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, Na Eun. Great job in expressing your thoughts on the homework topic. Continue to review the correct vocabulary to use. I'm happy to see your progress in your English writing skills. Have a great weekend. See you next week! ~Teacher Jane c",) 


I show that my worth to my actions. 
>> I show my worth through my actions. 

I will do correct actions of my worth. 
>> I will do the right actions to show my worth. 

And I try to do that.
>> And I do my best to do that. 
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