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My favorite dessert is 'cheesecake'.

유수빈/2025-03-07

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My favorite dessert is 'cheesecake'. So, I always eat cheesecake on my birthday. Because I like its thick texture, and I especially like eating cheesecake with milk. When I eat this dessert with milk, the thick texture changes the soft texture.

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Hi Kara!^^

My favorite dessert is fruit.

I ate cake for snack. hahaha

Here in the Philippines, we normally eat banana for dessert.

Andrea

My favorite dessert is 'cheesecake'. So, I always eat cheesecake on my birthday.

>> My favorite dessert is cheesecake, so I always eat it on my birthday.

Because I like its thick texture, and I especially like eating cheesecake with milk.

>> I like it because of its thick texture; I especially like it when I eat it with milk.

When I eat this dessert with milk, the thick texture changes the soft texture.

>> When I eat this dessert with milk, the thick texture changes to a soft one.