If there is a chance that I can foresee my future, I would like to know my success. >>> correct
>>> OR: If there is a chance that I can foresee my future, I would like to know how successful I will be.
Specifically, I would like to know when I can have a sustainable life in the UK.
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I was under financial instability for the past two years due to the currency rate, high tax and extremely expensive cost of living.
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Even it has been a two year, I was not able to make a savings, which was possible for me on the second month in Japan.
>>> Even though it has been two years, I was not able to make a savings, which was possible for me on the second month in Japan.
Due to financial instability, I had to go through health issues too because I volunteered for more jobs and had a second job over a year.
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Past two years I learned how people can get sick of having anxiety and concern about financial stability.
>>> For the past two years, I have learned how people can get sick of having anxiety and concern about financial stability.
I cannot say financial wellbeing is most important in your life.
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Many people find a way to maintain their livelihood with small income.
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However, I believe that abundant financial resources allow me to ground a foundation in successful foreign life.
>>> However, I believe that abundant financial resources would allow me to ground/establish a foundation in a successful foreign life.
This is because the money is what you can rely on if there is no one you can rely on to.
>>> OR: This is because money is what you can rely on if there is nobody to rely on.