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Preserving our native language

양기연/2025-03-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Our native language shows our culture and history. It also contains the attitude and spirit of Koreans. That's why many Koreans fought against Japanese policy for exterminating our language.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
You are right! Native languages are not merely languages, but they are basically the identity of a country. Their endangerment not only means losing words but also the native people’s views and way of thinking. So, preserving them while we still can is very important.
- T. Caitlyn 
Our native language shows our culture and history. 
>> CORRECT 
It also contains the attitude and spirit of Koreans. 
>> CORRECT 
That's why many Koreans fought against Japanese policy for exterminating our language.
>> That's why many Koreans fought against the Japanese policy of exterminating our language.
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