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Which is easier to remember?

최서연/2025-03-07

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I think good memory is easier to remember than bad memory. Because in some cases, extremely horrible memories enable to escape them from the memory such as mental disorders. However that case is very severe. In more normal case, we live with old memories like travel or accomplishment experience holding good feelings or good memory with friends, family. People tend to increase a similar type of memories because they remembered those.
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Hello, Seo Yeon!~
You actually provided a different answer than the others I asked. Although my response was really the exact opposite of yours, it was still good to see another viewpoint. It's also far better, I may add, to recollect happy memories and hold onto them. ^___^
Chammy
I think good memory is easier to remember than bad memory. Because in some cases, extremely horrible memories enable to escape them from the memory such as mental disorders.
>> I think a good memory is easier to remember than a bad one because, in some cases, extremely horrible memories enable us to escape from mental disorders. 
However that case is very severe. 
>> However, that refers to a severe extent.
In more normal case, we live with old memories like travel or accomplishment experience holding good feelings or good memory with friends, family.
>In a more normal case, we live with old memories like travel or accomplishment experience holding good feelings or good memory with friends and family.
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>>In a more normal circumstance, we live with pleasant memories of past experiences, such as vacations or successful efforts, as well as pleasant memories with friends and family.
 People tend to increase a similar type of memories because they remembered those.
>>  People tend to increase a similar type of memory because they remembered those.

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