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What are the advantages and disadvantages ot extremely hot and extremely cold weather?

차진혁/2025-03-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think the extremely hot is very hot but, extremely clld is very cold. So I think extremely hot and extremely cold is there are only have a disadvantages.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you in a few mintues! 


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                                    What are the advantages and disadvantages of extremely hot and extremely cold weather?


I think the extremely hot is very hot but, extremely clld is very cold.
>> I think extremely hot is very hot but, extremely cold is very cold.

So I think extremely hot and extremely cold is there are only have a disadvantages.
>> So I think extremely hot and extremely cold only have disadvantages. 
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