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2025.03.06 homework!
이노준/2025-03-06
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
1. My sister wears bangles. -> My sister not wears bangles
2. Rohan enjoys making models from clay. -> Rohan is disappointed making models from clay
3. Milk is rich in nutrients. -> Snack is insufficiency in nutrients.
4. The teacher reprimanded the boy for talking in the class.-> The teacher praised the boy for cleaning in the class
5. The girl sang really well.-> The girl couldn't sang really well.-> The girl couldn't sang very well.
6. We expect everyone to behave well.-> We unexpected to everyone to behave well.
7. She invited everyone to her party. -> She didn't invited from anyone in the party.
8. He answered all questions. -> He didn't understand about all questions.
9. She looked out of the window. -> She has a cold. So, she hasn't looked out of the window.
10. The boy secured the first rank. -> The boy failed to stay the current rank.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Chris!!
Thanks for answering you homework.
Have a great day ahead and I'll talk to you in our next class.
Always take care of yourself, you have been working hard this past few days and you need to eat healthy food.
Have a nice sleep!!!
T. Jeny
>>My sister does not wear bangles.
2. Rohan enjoys making models from clay. -> Rohan is disappointed making models from clay
2. Rohan enjoys making models from clay. -> Rohan is disappointed making models from clay
>> Rohan does not enjoy making models from clay.
3. Milk is rich in nutrients. -> Snack is insufficiency in nutrients.
3. Milk is rich in nutrients. -> Snack is insufficiency in nutrients.
>>Milk is not rich in nutrients.
4. The teacher reprimanded the boy for talking in the class.-> The teacher praised the boy for cleaning in the class
4. The teacher reprimanded the boy for talking in the class.-> The teacher praised the boy for cleaning in the class
>>The teacher did not reprimand the boy for talking in the class.
5. The girl sang really well.-> The girl couldn't sang really well.-> The girl couldn't sang very well.
5. The girl sang really well.-> The girl couldn't sang really well.-> The girl couldn't sang very well.
>>The girl did not sing well.
6. We expect everyone to behave well.-> We unexpected to everyone to behave well.
6. We expect everyone to behave well.-> We unexpected to everyone to behave well.
>>We do not expect everyone to behave well.
7. She invited everyone to her party. -> She didn't invited from anyone in the party.
7. She invited everyone to her party. -> She didn't invited from anyone in the party.
>>She did not invite everyone to her party.
8. He answered all questions. -> He didn't understand about all questions.
8. He answered all questions. -> He didn't understand about all questions.
>>He did not answer all questions.
9. She looked out of the window. -> She has a cold. So, she hasn't looked out of the window.
9. She looked out of the window. -> She has a cold. So, she hasn't looked out of the window.
>>She did not look out of the window.
10. The boy secured the first rank. -> The boy failed to stay the current rank.
10. The boy secured the first rank. -> The boy failed to stay the current rank.
>>The boy did not secure the first rank.
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