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장연우/2025-03-05

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hello.. I got a new skype id... but It's too late... I'm so sorry.. See you tomorrow..! my new id is 'live:.cid.1aec37239e1562ec'

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Chloe! :)

I sent you a Skype request so I hope that you can accept me there!

See you later.

~T. Divina^^

For correction purposes:

Original:

hello.. I got a new skype id... but It's too late... I'm so sorry..
See you tomorrow..! my new id is 'live:.cid.1aec37239e1562ec'

Correction:

Hello! I got a new Skype ID but it's too late. I'm so sorry.

See you tomorrow!

My new ID is 'live:.cid.1aec37239e1562ec'