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advice for someone to looking for true friends

조민정/2025-03-05

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What advice would you give someone looking for a true friend? If there are someone looking for a true friend, I want to advice to them,"just show your own thinking" It can't help try to show good thinking and behave. And do honest to someone who you want to have good relationship. It will be reveal if you make up your behave. Acutually, I think if we do everything in our thinking, there are absolutely something problem. but at that time, we should deal with that problem to discuss about that with your friends. It makes you and your friends more relative.
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Good evening, Alice! 

I see what you mean! Being genuine is definitely key to forming real friendships. Pretending to be someone you're not can’t last forever. Good friendships are built on honesty and understanding!

- Kristine ^^ 

If there are someone looking for a true friend, I want to advice to them,"just show your own thinking"
>> If someone is looking for a true friend, I want to advise them: 'Just express your true thoughts.
It can't help try to show good thinking and behave.
>> Trying to show only good thoughts and behavior won’t help.
And do honest to someone who you want to have good relationship.
>> And be honest with someone you want to have a good relationship with.
It will be reveal if you make up your behave.
>> It will be revealed if you fake your behavior.

Acutually, I think if we do everything in our thinking, there are absolutely something problem.
>> Actually, I think if we act purely based on our thoughts, there will definitely be some problems.
but at that time, we should deal with that problem to discuss about that with your friends.
>> But at that time, we should deal with the problem by discussing it with our friends.
It makes you and your friends more relative.
>> It strengthens the bond between you and your friends. 
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