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권경희/2025-03-05

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It might be dangerous that the number of wild bears continues to increase. When I visited Canada, I have ever seen separating between habitat of bears and people's tracking course completely in the mountain. Some places existed cable cars to move for people. And I saw warning sign "Many wild bears live hear, you are careful! Never go near them"
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Ms. Lily!
I believe Canada is well-acquainted with this situation, which is why they are managing it effectively. Soon your country also, would be able to find ways how to keep the safety of both bears and the hikers.
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~

It might be dangerous that the number of wild bears continues to increase.
>>> CORRECT!

When I visited Canada, I have ever seen separating between habitat of bears and people's tracking course completely in the mountain.
>>> When I visited Canada, I have ever seen a separation between the habitat of bears and people's tracking course completely in the mountain.

Some places existed cable cars to move for people.
>>> Some places had cable cars to move people.

And I saw warning sign "Many wild bears live hear, you are careful! Never go near them"
>>> And I saw a warning sign "Many wild bears live here, be careful! Never go near them"
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