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How does your family celebrate The March 1st Movement day.

차진혁/2025-03-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
We are celebrate the March 1st Movement day is watching the March 1st Movement day. And I watching March 1st Movement day YouTube.
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                                  How does your family celebrate The March 1st Movement Day?


We are celebrate the March 1st Movement day is watching the March 1st Movement day.
>> We celebrate the March 1st Movement Day by watching the March 1st Movement Day on TV.

And I watching March 1st Movement day YouTube.
>> And by watching March 1st Movement day on YouTube.
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