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조민정/2025-03-03

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How important is green space in a neighborhood? Should cities invest more in parks and recreational areas? A. I think green area is important because not only trees or gross can consume co2 and emit the oxygen, but also green makes people more relex. I really enjoy going to park with my dog after work. It's nothing special but it's the best way to take a break and just relax. I think it might be either to other person. So, I think city should make more park near the region where people live. It' much helpful to refresh people mind.

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Good morning, Alice!

I totally agree! Green spaces are really important for both the environment and our well-being. Having parks nearby makes it easier for people to relax and enjoy nature. I also think parks encourage outdoor activities like walking, jogging, or even just spending time with family and pets. Cities should definitely invest more in them!

- Kristine ^^

I think green area is important because not only trees or gross can consume co2 and emit the oxygen, but also green makes people more relex.

>> In my opinion green spaces are crucial, because they not only allow grass and trees to release oxygen and absorb CO2, but they also help people feel more relaxed.
I really enjoy going to park with my dog after work.

>> I really enjoy going to the park with my dog after work.

It's nothing special but it's the best way to take a break and just relax.

>> Correct.

I think it might be either to other person.

>> I think it might be the same for other people.
So, I think city should make more park near the region where people live.

>> So, I think cities should create more parks near residential areas.

It' much helpful to refresh people mind.

>> It's very helpful for refreshing people's minds.