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김예솔/2025-03-03

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What’s your comfort food? There are a lot of foods in this world. That means... there are a lot of, many kinds of foods that I like. The world is so huge. but, Korea is too small to try all the foods in this world. so actually most of the foods that I can call 'comfort food' are foods that can eat in Seoul, Korea. My biggest one is tteokbokki(떡볶이). Do you know what is it??? I think tteokbokki is one of the famous foods in Korea. tteokbokki is so lovely and delicious. It is made with a rice cake and seasoning based gochujang. I like the savory and spicy flavors. That is my taste. But nowadays, I mean the late 2010 to NOw, many tteokbokki professional brands have appeared, and the price of tteokbokki has also gone. That means many live-alone people, like me, it's hard to buy and eat and can enjoy it. So... that is the most sad part for me.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Yesol!
Thank you for sharing your comfort food! :> There are tons of delicacies from other countries that we haven't tried. However, our comfort food holds a special place in our hearts like our homeland. Tteokbokki is widely known even outside Korea. I even had tteokbokki before the concert last Saturday! :D It is best to eat it with family or friends, so I totally get you. ^^
~ Trixia

CONTENT:
There are a lot of foods in this world. 
-CORRECT
That means... there are a lot of, many kinds of foods that I like. 
- That means there are many kinds of foods that I like.
The world is so huge. but, Korea is too small to try all the foods in this world.
- The world is so huge, but Korea is too small to try all the foods in this world.
so actually most of the foods that I can call 'comfort food' are foods that can eat in Seoul, Korea. 
- So actually, most of the foods that I can call 'comfort food' are foods that I can eat in Seoul, Korea.
My biggest one is tteokbokki(떡볶이). 
- My top comfort food is tteokbokki(떡볶이).
Do you know what is it??? 
- Do you know what it is???
I think tteokbokki is one of the famous foods in Korea. 
- I think tteokbokki is one of the most famous foods in Korea.
tteokbokki is so lovely and delicious. 
- It is so lovely and delicious.
It is made with a rice cake and seasoning based gochujang. 
- It is made with rice cakes and seasoning based on gochujang.
I like the savory and spicy flavors. 
-CORRECT
That is my taste. 
- That is my taste preference.
But nowadays, I mean the late 2010 to NOw, many tteokbokki professional brands have appeared, and the price of tteokbokki has also gone. 
- However, from the late 2010s to now, many professional tteokbokki brands have appeared, and the price of tteokbokki has also gone up.
That means many live-alone people, like me, it's hard to buy and eat and can enjoy it. 
- That means for many people who live alone, like me, it is hard to buy and enjoy it.
So... that is the most sad part for me. 
- So... that is the saddest part for me.
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